Story board amendments:
I wan't happy with the shot compositions of shot 3A and 5A as the imagery wasn't impacting as much as it could have been. I analysed the composition of shots from Fantasia 2000 the Fire Bird Suite in particular shots where the Fire Bird bursts form the volcano.
Using a similar shot composition I recomposed shot 3A to have the Snow Queen rising form the centre as a-posse to the rising from the right hand side. This composition emphasises the movement of the Snow Queen as she bursts out of the ground in from of the surprised traveller. This gives her a new more powerful standing in relation to the traveller. With the overall changes the narrative and the visual narrative have a greater fluidity and the Snow Queens entrance is a more theatrical and affective one.
Updated Story board:
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